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Luca’s waiting for me in the foyer when I head downstairs.
Scene should be more climactic of a moment when he sees her all dolled up for the first time
Also, I was not planning on proofreading or noting my edits and suggestions but this was too much of an egregious mistake and disservice to be ignored
There are numerous errors and edits to be addressed before this
?” There are some grass and dirt stains o
Singular or Plural: 'are' or 'is'
'There are some grass and dirt stains on'
I swear, the last time I glanced at the time it was three o’clock.”
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